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The End of the World

Discussion in 'The World of Battle Bay' started by R4Z0R, 21 May 2018.

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  1. TheAntiSnipe

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    I read a little Alex Rider myself and was wondering why the move sounded familiar LOLZ
     
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    lol i should be more original
     
  3. TheAntiSnipe

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    You need to showcase the untrained aspect of MC, Alex Rider was trained in martial arts. A normal person would've tackled/punched the guard in the face/belly
     
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    maybe he has killer instincts (stereotypical alert!!!)
    nah ok he just football tackles him?
     
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    Maybe ;-)

    I write scifi so take my feedback with a LARGE grain of salt
     
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  6. R4Z0R

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    ...smashed into a guard. Reached into pocket and threw salt in his face like the SALT BAE...he screams memes and I leggit
    :p
     
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    You forgot about the teabagging;):p
     
  8. R4Z0R

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    uhhhh not kid friendly no?
     
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  9. Rainbow Warrior

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    Wow! Fanfic! I need to read it, now :D:D:D
     
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    Chapter 4
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    My sleeves keep falling down...hard to write but I'm managing. Guard is out cold...tied up under the bed. The guard's uniform is slightly big on me...but it should work. It better work. The guard carried a utility belt...marked N.O.I...torch could come in handy...tazer, N.O.I on the handle...keys also marked N.O.I... I guess I'll keep them on. I don't have a plan...just find my parents...get the hell out before bad things happen...Glance at my watch...nearly lunch...counting on the fact that lunch break will allow me to get to wherever the HQ is without problems. Hustle time.
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    Moving silently...swiftly...tazer in one hand...away from the Disassembly sector. Trying not to think about what other humans have gone through in this place...adrenaline surging, rushing...ready to kill if need be, or at least I tell myself. Who am I kidding? Just a 16 year old boy with no combat experience...might as well surrender...but no...have to find out what happened to my parents. A turn in the hallway, left to EXIT, right to Central Comm. Tempted as I am to leggit, I have to uncover the mystery behind this place. Wayward...sigh...central command it is. Right. Straight down the corridor. Two guards silently wheeling a stretcher. I duck into a doorway crevice...hold my breath in...pray that I won't be seen. They pass silently, looking down so they can't see me. I choke back a cry as I see the patient in the stretcher. My mind whirls...staggering but straightened myself...tried to contain my emotions. It was Mum. But it wasn't. It was just a skin. Her skin, her usually smiling face, now a piece of skin. Detached skin, not a whole full body piece. Arm skin...leg skin. My vision blurs. Mum...I'm so sorry. I lean back against the door. Clenched my jaw. Tears flowing, now drying. Emotions hardening. Wipe my eyes. Grip the tazer...white-knuckled. Mum, someone will pay...I swear.
     
  11. R4Z0R

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    chapter 4 just dropped :)
     
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    Dayum
     
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    I reaaaally liked it! Hey maybe a warning telling it that the story has horror images would be nice (way less than an Stephen King book but still) :D
    PS: I'm so curious to know if your stpry occurs at past or if it just occurs while there's no battle on the map :p
     
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    Daaaaaamn thats dark. I fraaking love it!
     
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  15. R4Z0R

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    um its set around the time period of before this map was flooded, so no battle on map yet :)
    lol this story is too scary isn't it...lemme know I'll change if need be :p
     
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    I'll change it for you :D
    "Chapter 5:"
    chepter 5
    there are rainbows everywhere
    i escap out of earth and fly to mars
    jk
     
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    Fanfiction of the fanfiction

    Suddenly I came to. Blindfolded, dizzy, completely sensory-deprived... except tasting drying salty tears and overwhelmed with the deafening blow of my heartbeat ringing through the chambers of my ears into my soul. As if coming up from water, my hearing regained and I bellowed "m-m-moh!!"... "da-a-ah!!" through the gag over my mouth, but no useful sound could be heard. Behind the near-pitch black of the blindfold, my eyes had adjusted to see frantic flickering lights coming from the end of a hallway. With my arms tied behind my back, I slammed by body against the wall and inched my way forward toward the light. The movement loosened the blindfold's grip on my face and as it fell to my chin I looked up to the source of the light... a humming neon sign reading "Wayward Institute.... Disassembly Wing." "MOHH!!!" DAAHH!!!" I screamed fruitlessly, and as I listened into the void I heard a scream that made my heart skip a beat, familiar.... followed by crying, and "No!!!!!!!!"
     
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    i can see it now: 10 OF THE DARKEST SECRET EASTER EGGS IN BATTLE BAY uploaded by BRIGHT SIDE lmao
     
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    Woah, save it for battle bay lore.
     
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    Moahhhhhhhhh That can't happen! Dahhhhhhh!
     

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