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ok everyone, here is what i have so far, i hope you read it and like it, make sure to comment on this post, however, some comments i may not reply to because i probably dont want to ruin a surprise.
BATTLE BAY THE MOVIE
WRITTEN BY MICHAEL HARP
AKA “HARPO!”
Opening scene
Camera scans over a very empty bay, vast, and beautiful, and sunny
Voice Over:
Harbormaster:
Your parents probably told you to not go to far into the water, because there might be sharks or you could drown
Drowning? Really? That’s the best thing that you got? You can’t scare me with anything else? Well let me try...
(camera shows the bay)
Welcome to the bay
The most dreadful place in existence
(the camera starts to show broken down ships, fires, broken rock pieces, and smoke.)
(cont’d)
Two sides at war for hundreds of years
The Gaians, and Carthaginians.
And no resolve
(camera shows a huge graveyard of destroyed ships)
Until today
(camera zooms out again and shows the whole bay
In the distance, a streak of blue light can be spotted zooming over the waters
The camera zooms in to show us a speeder boat. On the side of the boat, there are words S.S. Hornet)
(camera shows the inside of the ship, as well as the captain, Swift!)
Swift:
Alright seadogs, I'm ready! Where are you grandpas?
Bhurt:
Swift! What did I say about falling out of line?
Swift:
Do it with style?
Bhurt:
Get your butt back here now!
Swift:
Alright alright, turning around. Sheesh!
(we see Swift’s radar pick up a green dot. It’s his guild captain Bhurt. He is the lead shooter of the team and the second in command when it comes to political deals.)
Bhurt:
Thank you. Please stay in position. Cause if you get caught out of position-
Swift:
I know! I’ll die because aren't fast enough to keep up.
Bhurt:
Hey, watch your tone.
Swift:
Sorry. Is there ever gonna be a day where I can be my own leader?
Bhurt:
Yeah, get your own guild.
(swift sighs)
Aww I’m sorry, did Grandpa hurt your feelings?
Swift:
Ok! Just start the battle.
Bhurt:
Alright
(Bhurt turns to a stereo like system, and flips a switch. A green light turns on.)
Brock! Can you hear me? Come in Brock.
Brock:
This is defender leader brock, reporting for duty sir. How are we today?
Bhurt:
Fantastic. Ready to dominate! This one is for Carthage!
Brock:
Agreed. Lets rock!
(camera zooms out again to show the bay as the three ships and a small armada behind filing in behind them)
Bhurt:
Alright broadcasting to fleet
(Bhurt flips multiple switches on his stereo, and tons of lights turn green.
Shooters one through four, come in please.
Shooter 1:
Here
Shooter 2:
present :
Shooter 3:
Hello
Shooter 4:
Good afternoon captain!
Bhurt:
Speeders please come in
Speeder 1:
Reporting
Speeder 2:
Here sir
Speeder 3:
Reporting:
Sepeeder 4:
Hello captain
Bhurt:
Great! And now defenders, let's hear you!
Defender 1:
Present
Defender 2:
Present as well
Defender 3:
I’m here
Defender 4:
Copy that
Bhurt:
Perfect! Everyone's here!
(on Bhurt’s screen more dots have shown up on radar)
Alright everyone. We are going into the most heavily guarded territory. There are a lot of objects on this map, so be careful, the enemy can be hiding behind anyone of these glaciers. Also, defenders, keep your boats away from the glaciers, they’ll slow you down and make you easy targets. Everyone understand.
All:
Yes.
Bhurt:
Good. Listen to my commands for the rest of the battle. And lets see how these fight.
(camera zooms out again and shows the entire Carthaginian fleet moving over the icy waters. Bhurt’s ship is out in front leading the charge, the speeders following closely up behind, and the defenders bringing up the rear. Everyone is in perfect position, almost like a marching band.)
(camera changes back to the inside of Bhurt’s ship. It shows a red dot appearing on his radar.)
Bhurt:
I’m picking something up 50 meters ahead.
Swift:
Got it! Speeders lets go!
Bhurt:
Swift! Nevermind
Alright Shooters and defenders, follow up the speeders. Whoever they find, we gotta pick them off.
(camera zooms out to show the speeders coming up on an enemy ship. The rest of the team comes in from behind)
Swift:
Everyone there are three ships here and five of us. I’ll stun the first guy and then we’ll all trade tesla shots. Pick off the guy in the back.
(the speeders dance around the small force of shooters causing them tons of trouble. Swift hits the first shooter with a blast cannon shot and stuns him immediately. Then Swift and two speeders zoom past the group, to the back, quickly turn their turrets, and fire torpedoes at the back two shooters, they go down immediately. The two remaining speeders in the front, trade blast cannon shots and tesla bolts and kill the last shooter.)
Swift:
Yes!
(a mortar shot from far away hits one of the speeders and damages a rudder. More mortar shots come from out of nowhere and the speeders really start taking damage.)
Bhurt:
Speeders move out. Defenders take the front and push back the enemy, give some protection to our speeders. Shooters, let's kill. Mortimer is out there.
(the battle continues with the defenders making a very deadly push. The shooters on the enemy side are forced back but are doing a good job keeping the Carthaginians back. The shooters are doing a good job dealing damage, however a new line of ships appears)
Brock:
Captain, there is a new line of ships about 34 meters out to our northeast. Enforcer line. We gotta take them down.
Bhurt:
Swift, you guys need to regroup as best as possible and stop the enforcer line.)
Swift:
Yes sir.
(swift looks at his radar and sees a line of 10 enforcers making their way towards the shooter and defenders)
Oh god.
(The damaged speeders make their way towards the line of enforcers)
Swift:
Alright everyone, same ordeal, stun, and pick ‘em off.
(camera switches back to the Carthaginian shooters and defenders. The defenders have succesfully damaged the enemy team and are pushing in to get the final kill. However, the Gaians disappear behind a glacier, and go off of radar.)
Bhurt:
No no no, follow them! Don't let them get away.
(The Carthaginians go behind the the glacier as well only to met by a fully healed up team of Gaians. They have fixers)
Bhurt:
Shoot, quick retreat retreat retreat. Fall back.
(the carthaginians fall back shooting minimal cannon shots back at the enemy and taking a lot of damage)
(Camera switches back to the speeders. They are approaching the enforcers with full force.)
Swift:
Ok, on my mark. NOW!
(the speeders shoot their tesla bolts directly at the enforcers. However the enforcers block the onslaught of bolts with their shields.)
Swift:
What! You gotta be kidding me what the heck was that! Speeders, regroup and fall back, don't rush in!
(the speeders fall back and regroup behind a glacier)
Speeder 3:
Swift how are we gonna do this, they just stopped our bolts completely
Swift:
Alright, I got it. Whos got the frost?
Speeder 1 and 2:
Frost launcher!/I got a blaster!
Swift:
Ok, so here's what we’re gonna do, the frost speeders will come out from behind the glacier on the left side, the rest of us on the right. As soon as we pop out, frosters freeze, and the rest of us fire our cannons. Is that clear?
All speeders:
Yes!
Swift:
Good, now go go GO!
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