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Script for the Movie

Discussion in 'Offtopic' started by HARPO!, 9 Mar 2018.

  1. HARPO!

    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    @The Friendly Fixer just so you know you are in this one, you are the name of the restaurant that the team goes to eat at, it is called Friendly Fixer's Firehouse Subs :D
     
  2. HARPO!

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    can anyone guess who the two people at the end of part 8 are????
     
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    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    9. oh yeah, part nine baby let's go. It's just a talking scene. more coming later this week! :D

    (the groups walks outside of Friendly Fixer’s Firehouse Subs to another table that faces the street. The other guy sits down as well as the woman with him, and then the Guild 1 guys do so as well.)


    Bhurt:

    Um


    The other guy:

    Shut up.


    (they sit down)


    Bhurt:

    Can I talk now?


    The other guy:

    Let me go first


    Who are you?


    Bhurt:

    I am just a traveler, this is my brother, (he points to Brock) and these are my kids


    The other guy:

    Where’s your wife?


    *(At the same time)*

    At the hotel (Bhurt)

    Dead (Brock)


    Bhurt:

    At the hotel


    The other guy:

    Oh really, then what’s with the badge


    Bhurt:

    It’s nothing


    The other guy:

    You aren’t gonna hide anything from me just so you know right?


    Bhurt:

    I’m not hiding anything from you


    The other guy:

    Sure. Captain.


    Bhurt:

    Uh…


    The other guy:

    Ohh, so you are hiding something. Shocking. It’s like I’ve done this before


    Bhurt:

    Ok who are you.


    The other guy:

    Who are you


    Bhurt:

    No let’s start with you, since you’re the one who wants to talk first


    Bunta:

    Ok. My name is Bunta. This is my friend Yves. Who are you?


    Bhurt:

    I am Captain Bhurt of Guild 1


    Bunta:

    Wow. So what brings here?


    Swift:

    We want to find information


    Bhurt:

    Well, first tell me why did you save us in there?


    Bunta:

    I wanted to know who you actually were. If you really were from Guild 1 then you could be of use to us. Now, what information do you want from us?


    Bhurt:

    Well...um.


    Brock:

    What do you know about Douglas?

    (turns to Bhurt)

    You were taking too long


    Bunta:

    Douglas? Like the factory


    Bhurt:

    Yes


    Yves:

    I hate them


    Bunta:

    Calm down. But yes. Hate is the right word for how we feel about that factory


    Bhurt:

    What happened to it?


    Bunta:

    Well we were raided you know that?


    Bhurt:

    Yes.


    Bunta:

    Oh so you do know some stuff


    Bhurt:

    I just wanna know something about the railgun


    Yves:

    The railgun? What about it?


    Brock:

    You know about it?


    Yves:

    Yes, it was designed here a long time ago by Gilligan.


    Bhurt:

    And then he died


    Bunta:

    Sure let’s put it that way


    Bhurt:

    Wait he...he didn’t die?


    Swift:

    You were right


    Bunta:

    No. No one from Douglas was killed in the raids. Only threatened.


    Yves:

    Ever since that day guards from Gaia have been stationed here around Niento just to make sure that no one leaves the city


    Brock:

    Why can’t you leave?


    Yves:

    Because, we know stuff about that monstrous weapon that not everyone does. We were there when it was designed, just not built.


    Brock:

    Do you still have the resources to build it? I mean the factory is still there right?



    Bunta:

    No. It was destroyed completely.


    Yves:

    They didn’t want us to build one cause if they did, we would definitely supply Carthage with one, just to make a fair fight


    Brock:

    So we can’t build one?


    Yves:

    Well…


    Bunta:

    Just how every business does dirty stuff well so does this one


    Bhurt:

    What?


    Bunta:

    There is an underground system, where people exchange weapons for parts, power cells to increase the weapons abilities, pieces to build new ones, and gold


    Yves:

    Lots of gold


    Bunta:

    You guys trade there?


    Bunta:

    Well now we can


    Brock:

    What do you mean?


    Bunta:

    This is where you help us. A you scratch my back I scratch yours quid pro quo thingy.



    Bhurt:

    You are not getting our money


    Bunta:

    Fine, then face that railgun head on in battle. I won’t give you any insight on it


    Bunta:

    I’ll make you


    Bunta:

    Go ahead try, this entire village wants you dead and you think that you’re just gonna pull a weapon on me and that’s it, I’m dead?


    Listen close and listen carefully. I can help you win. That’s why you came here right?


    Bhurt:

    Yes.


    Bunta:

    Well then let me help you. I just need your help


    Bhurt:

    You better not trick me


    Bunta:

    I won’t. I’m an honest man


    Bhurt:

    Fine, deal. I’ll help you.


    Bunta:

    Oh and one more thing


    Bhurt:

    What?


    Bunta:

    You help me and Yves get out of this city alive


    Bhurt:

    What do we get for that


    (Bunta and Yves share a look)


    Yves:

    We could serve in war for you?
     
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    Hell yeah! Getting better and better with each new installment!
     
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    Bunta!!!!!
     
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    Keeps Getting better!
     
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    The Friendly Fixer Well-Known Member

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    Lol :)
     
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  9. The Friendly Fixer

    The Friendly Fixer Well-Known Member

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    But just asking well I be a in a part later in the movie as a Fixer XD
     
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    Getting intense and intense and intense.......:p
     
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  11. TheAntiSnipe

    TheAntiSnipe Moon's haunted

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    Now I want moar!

    Blacktail in a shiny mk7!
    P0rthos!
    Eeyore(make him a crazy dude who looves torpedoes)
    And moi!
     
  12. SupremeCalamitas

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    I already got my part in the movie :p

    Maybe let one of the devs in the script?
     
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    just keep doing it your great:rolleyes::)
     
  14. HARPO!

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    10. Small add on today. Enjoy. More coming soon.
    (Bhurt gives a look towards Brock, Swift, and Sean. He is shocked because he almost said yes. But why would he let a couple of rogue looking, jobless slugs in Guild 1? For info? To help them get a better life? No. Just no. How could he trust them with the best ships on the waters right now.)

    Bhurt:
    Why would I trust you with the best ships in the bay right now?

    Yves:
    Cause we built them

    Bunta:
    And we know how to make the ships better

    Swift:
    You can make the ships better

    Bunta:
    You don’t know a lot about this bay. The only reason why Gaia is still able to keep their foot in this war is because they are playing a dirty game with you guys. I’m telling you that everything could be better and there are ways to get it there. Gaians know about these ways. You don’t. I want to help you. And I know a lot of people who want to help you too. That’s why I saved your butt in there.

    Bhurt:
    What if I don’t trust you?

    Bunta:
    Then that’s your problem.

    Bhurt:
    Are you doubting my captain abilities?

    Bunta:
    I don’t doubt that you are very smart, in fact I’m very impressed that you have made it this far into the war. All I’m saying is that your special battle tactics aren’t gonna do a thing if they are bringing out the big guns and you’re stuck with weak equipment.

    Brock:
    Why do you want to help us

    Yves:
    Freedom that’s why

    (People look around again)

    We are watched like hawks in our own towns. We aren’t able to go out unless the generals from Gaia who run this village don’t allow us to come out until a certain time. They restrict us from the clothes that we wear, the food that we eat. You guys have no idea how many people want you to win. Carthage needs to win.

    Bhurt:
    I feel like I need some time to think

    Bunta:
    Hold on, let me show you something

    (Bunta and Yves stand up and look at the guild 1 guys. Bhurt stands up)

    Bhurt:
    What is it?

    Yves:
    We’ll show you

    (Bhurt gives a look to Brock. He gets up and Swift and Sean follow. Bunta leaves a tip on the table and leaves. The group follows the two rogues out of the restaurant into the very busy, noisy street)

    Bunta:
    You see, everywhere around this place is full of people who are dying to get a job, or get free. On the one side of town, you get the walls where they lock up the people trying to escape, and kill them. On the other side, you get the people who sell their souls away to the Gaians for a job serving them, just to make money.

    Bhurt:
    What do you do?

    Bunta:
    Me? Well we should talk in private about that, but first a show.

    Brock:
    A show?

    Yves:
    Not a good one.

    Brock:
    What kind of show

    Yves:
    It’s more of a public speaker type thing

    Bunta:
    Except he’s not for the public. Everyone who worked for Douglas hates this man.

    Bhurt:
    Then why are you taking us there?

    Bunta:
    Because, then you’ll see what we have to deal with on a daily basis

    (The group walks forward and makes a turn a little ways down the street. They pass a sign that says “The Wise Neptune Speaks!”)
     
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    Good Job Bro!!, Like Always!!! :) :D :eek:
     
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    I am wise?
     
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    Impressive.
     
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    I’m gonna make an edit to I think script section nine. I made Bunta’s character too weak and so I’ll be coming out with a rivision post today. You’ll see how that looks and then now you’ll know what to look for later in the future.

    More additions coming to the story next. This part will be hard to write because the man who i hinted at in the end of the final section, Neptune, @Neptune Gaming, will be giving a speech. So it’s gonna be hard to give the speech giver some lines, while the Guild One members and the town rogue Niento people have a side conversation. So give me some time for that. Also, please give your full opinion all the time on the story. What I could include, cause I actually listen, and maybe suggestions that I could change.

    Thanks for your support and Cooperation, this thread is becoming one of the most viewed and liked threads in the Off Topic Section and that’s because of you guys.

    Also check out my YouTube to see some kicker gameplay.


    https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIM9ObvClRRicAOmpAw3wMQ

    Love Harpo!
     
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    Nice! Maybe at the end there could be a epic showdown between Burt and Isak which results in Swift coming to the rescue?
     
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