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Script for the Movie

Discussion in 'Offtopic' started by HARPO!, 9 Mar 2018.

  1. HARPO!

    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    I’ll try.
     
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  2. Agile Vanguard

    Agile Vanguard Well-Known Member

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    Swift is a girl.......
     
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  3. HARPO!

    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    I know, I saw in the B.B. lore thread. Whatever.
     
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  4. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    Can we get the next script plz?
     
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  5. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    Can u?
     
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  6. HARPO!

    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    16. ENJOY!!!
    Brock:

    Yeah, well these guys are worth it.


    Bhurt:

    How? They’re savages. Their entire town is destroyed because of how weak they were to protect it.


    Brock:

    How could you say that.


    Bhurt:

    Because it is absolutely TRUE!


    Brock:

    (pauses)

    Are you ok?


    Bhurt:

    WE can’t do this. WE have spent our entire lives following orders to keep us safe and now we are bringing in refugees that apparently know something about the enemy. What they witnessed in their city is nowhere close to what we see on the bay.


    Brock:

    But that doesn’t mean we turn our back to people in need


    Bhurt:

    In need? The only thing they did was save us from dying within the first 5 minutes of our trip.


    Brock:

    Ok stop it. What is really wrong. You wanted to get answers and you are carrying them on the same boat you are on. Why are you discrediting your idea now? You were all for it the other day.


    Bhurt:

    I was all for it because I wasn’t expecting to bring them with us.


    Brock:

    I don’t think that’s your problem.


    Bhurt:

    I’m getting removed.


    Brock:

    What?


    Bhurt:

    The Harbormaster contacted me before our trip. He said that my riskiness was too much. That’s why I’ve been uptight about this and very tense towards Swift. (WHO IS A GIRL< NOW I KNOW> AWWWWWKWARRRRRRD!!!!)



    I’ve been given one second chance, so the next battles we need to win or else I lose my position.


    Brock:

    I’m sorry.


    Bhurt:

    It’s not your fault. I should never have put her in a boat anyway.


    Brock:

    Don’t say that. You did it for a reason. You saw something in her.


    Bhurt:

    I know the same thing I saw in Orpheus


    Brock:

    What was that?


    Bhurt:

    A spirit. A joy. The same joy i got out of fighting for Carthage. I never forgave myself for that day. If only i was one second faster…


    Brock:

    That grenade would’ve killed you too.


    Bhurt:

    Better me than my SON!


    Bunta:

    Hey, are you ok princess?


    (Bhurt and Brock look at Bunta wondering how long he has been there.)


    Bhurt:

    I’m fine. Go away. This is a private talk


    Bunta:

    Well with how loud you are talking it sounds like gospel choir, so I felt obligated to chime in.

    Brock:

    Now’s not the time for jokes bud


    Bunta:

    Hey you aren’t the only one who is upset.


    Bhurt:

    What?


    Bunta:

    The entire knows about you guys. You are legends. That’s why we wanted to save your lives back in that bar. That’s why people gave you funny looks on the streets.


    Brock:

    (to Bhurt)

    It’s why they were so excited to get help, because they weren’t the only one waiting for it.


    Bunta:

    Exactly.


    All across this bay are people who want their old lives back. They want to be free and feel safe when going outside of their house. You guys have given them that feeling and the men you are taking refuge on this boat are so lucky to be in your presence.


    Brock:

    That’s why I think the Harbormaster won’t be upset. I also think this is why you shouldn’t be so mad. What happens in the past hurts Bhurt but you can either learn from it and move on or let it eat you alive.


    Bhurt:

    Don’t fill me with words. You don’t understand the pressure and pain that I am enduring at this second.


    Brock:

    I know i won’t understand but I know you Bhurt.


    Bhurt:

    What do you know me as?

    Brock:

    A gracious man. Humble. A great leader. A great father.


    Bunta:

    Listen I won’t lie I did hear the part about Orpheus but I must say, that does not make you a bad person.


    Bhurt:

    You do NOT understand!


    Bunta:

    Oh but I do. I have lost loved ones too. Except this time you have been given a second chance with that Swift kid. And she’s pretty special. I can show her the ropes to her ship.


    Brock:

    See. They do have some answers.


    Bhurt:

    I’ll let you train her.

    BUT


    If you hurt her, or God forbid have her slip away under your watch. You’ll be speaking to my satan. You understand?


    Bunta:

    Your ovation is my dedication.
     
  7. #IHATEMYTEAM11

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    @HARPO! , how long did it take you to make all this script?
     
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  8. HARPO!

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    My life. Lol. I don’t know. I think about them for a while. Then edit to show what I got so far for the next part.
     
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    Nice!:eek:Now we have some emotional content!
     
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  10. PhoenixLife

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    I'm not in it :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(
    Why Me?!??!
    Dude @HARPO! plz put me in the next one. I'm begging u!
    I'm even following u
    Plz put me in the next one
     
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  11. PhoenixLife

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    Idea for next script:
    (Later on the boat ride)
    Suddenly a ship comes out of nowhere and lobs a grenade at the ship knocking Swift off the boat.
    Bhurt: Swift!
    Then suddenly another ship comes up and launches a railgun shot at other ship and 1 shot destroys it.
    Bhurt: Aim all cannons at that railgun ship!
    Voice: Wait! It was Swift
    Swift: This man saved me
    Lights comes on from the railgun boat. There was Swift standing by the man.
    Bhurt: Who is this who saved my daughter?
    Man: PhoenixLife
    Bhurt: Well welcome aboard! Meet our members (names of all members that I can't remember)
    PhoenixLife: Well let's get a move on

    Well u take it from here
     
  12. PallabKumarS

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    :D
     
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  13. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    U actually read it???
     
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  14. PallabKumarS

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    Yeah.....
     
  15. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    Is it good?
     
  16. PallabKumarS

    PallabKumarS Active Member

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    Sorry but....its too quick......like a tornado came and passed in 1 sec....u should make it more detailed,slow......:p
     
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  17. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    Most Important post in this thread
    @HARPO! Do I have ur permission to make my own movie script?
     
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  18. PhoenixLife

    PhoenixLife Well-Known Member

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    Did u sew bottom?
    It said u take it from here
    U as in @HARPO!
     
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  19. HARPO!

    HARPO! Well-Known Member

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    I mean yeah sure, but keep it on a different thread, that way we don’t confuse the people reading this one.
     
  20. PhoenixLife

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    Thx that's what I was gonna do anyway. Also did i read my script.
     
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