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A short little story (fan fiction) Post yours too!

Discussion in 'Offtopic' started by wreck your day, 5 Apr 2018.

  1. wreck your day

    wreck your day Well-Known Member

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    The frosty wind blew by, bringing the freezing air from the north down to the bay. Violent waves crashed forcefully onto the crumbling icebergs, causing large chunks of ice to crash into the water. In this endless sea of blue and white, a measly dot of faded yellow stood out. A lone enforcer struggled on in the choppy waves, it's feeble electric engine straining to keep the ship going. It was the sole survivor of an invasion by an armanda of enemy battleships. The enforcer had only just escaped from it; the horrifying massacre, the inescapable torpedos, the appearance of a mysterious weapon, the dark fumes of countless shipwrecks, the humiliating loss of the Headquarters... all that had existed just a mere few hours ago is now gone.

    The enforcer surreptitiously glanced around before disappearing into a hardly discernable slit in the ice. Towering walls of jagged ice lined both sides of the narrowing channel. It got so cramped that the enforcer could only just squeeze through with a few centimetres to spare. The passage eventually widened to reveal an enormous, barren cave. "At least those cut-throat maniacs haven't found this yet..." Just then, the enforcer heard a loud swoosh of the originally still water. Making use of its quick turret speed, it swiftly turned around. There was a lone shadowy figure, advancing, closer, and closer...


    [Edit: removed 3rd paragraph and added a few sentences!]

    Fun fact: I spent 3-4 hours writing these 2 paragraphs!
     
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  2. wreck your day

    wreck your day Well-Known Member

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    Nobody writes stories here on the forum? :(
     
  3. PallabKumarS

    PallabKumarS Active Member

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    Did u forget about harpo's thread......or haven't seen that yet...
     
  4. wreck your day

    wreck your day Well-Known Member

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    But that's a movie script! It's a looooong story with tension, lots of possibilities and backstories! It's also kind of revolved around that one situation. This thread is just for those little moments of inspiration that motivate people to write little tales :)
     
  5. PallabKumarS

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    But still i liked the first two paragraph.....it felt like something gonna happen.......third wasn't good...i am not good at writing story..so just reading...
     
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  6. wreck your day

    wreck your day Well-Known Member

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    I couldn't think of how to link! Maybe I should just remove the third paragraph entirely...

    Anyone can choose whether to write or not, if you don't want to I'm perfectly fine with it! It's just that I'm surprised nobody here (so far) writes stories like me. Or perhaps I'm just that one weirdo who does that lol.
     
  7. Bradley Thorinsson

    Bradley Thorinsson Well-Known Member

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    Im studying right now..but I'll post a story here too :):):)
     
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    Why would u be weirdo....slowly think of something to add.....its good...
     
  9. wreck your day

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    Just so you know, I'm not planning to make this a novel or movie script like Harpo's! I'll bore to death pondering over how to link up the stories, and what new stuff to add in :p
     
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  10. Bradley Thorinsson

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    Let's make a "continued story",
    Where I'll post part of a story ..then someone else continues it with the same overall flow of the first part...and the 3rd continues it with the flow of the 2nd part, the 4th continues it with the flow of the 3rd. The fifth does so on...and so on and so on.

    Okay so heres the first part:

    The monstrous roar of the rumbling clouds shook through the bay, like the growl of a mountain avalanche. His breath came in raging gasps, as he glared at the sky, but his expectant gaze met nothing save for the hollowness of the world and the cold stars stared back: uncaring and harsh.

    Lo! The night covered the day and sleep crept over him. The last thing he remembered before falling into his waking dreams was a glimpse of the high waves and astride them - in the distance - a formidable fleet of gigantic blue MARK-7
    Defenders, rushing to his rescue...



    Edit: Just incase you were wondering, this took me 2 minutes think of:oops:
     
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