Script for the Movie

6.
This is a small continuation of the previous scene of about four lines or so. Then there are some very touching moments in here. Hopefully my bad writing doesn't screw them up, lol. Other than that, you'll get some more insight into why these characters love Swift so much. You'll like me for it. Also, say hi to Captain @Cryix everyone. LOL Let me know if you want your name as an Easter Egg. I'll try my best to fit it into the story line I got going on right now. ALSO REMINDER: this is a rough draft for the script, so understand that if it is trash, could be elaborated on, or edited in any way, I'm already on it. I just gotta keep the story coming for you guys. Hope you like this part.



Bhurt:

Yeah let’s do. Any hey Swift!


Swift:

Yeah?


Bhurt:

Tell Brock to meet me at the Harbormaster's chamber. We will have to inform him of our absence.


Swift:

Yessir






















(Moments later. Bhurt enters the Harbormaster’s chamber.)


Harbormaster:

Ah. Captain. You’re leaving?


Bhurt:

Yes


Harbormaster:

Really? Instead of fighting the war? That’s a bit unlike you Captain.


Bhurt:

I’m aware


Harbormaster:

Very well then. I will grant you permission to Cargo 6G3. That is Sector 6, row G, ship number 3. Got it?


Bhurt:

Got it. Thank you


Harbormaster:

May I ask why you are leaving?


Bhurt:

Um. Finding information Harbormaster. I wanna know how to combat to the new weapon


Harbormaster:

The only way to do that is by facing it in war Captain. Not by watching videos and going of on business trips


Bhurt:

I don’t care Harbormaster. All I know is that something has to be done about it. This tip is needed. Thanks for your time Harbormaster.





(A moment later, Bhurt is stopped by Swift in the halls)


Bhurt:

Hey


Swift:

Hey. I told Brock.


Bhurt:

Good


Swift:

What are you doing?


Bhurt:

Eh..nothing just, just get packed.


Swift:

Hey.


Bhurt:

What?


Swift:

Um...can Sean come?


Bhurt:

I don’t care!


(off of Swift’s upset look. Bhurt knew that he just got mad at him again.)


Brock told me to be nicer. To you especially. Swift, I don’t how many times this is gonna happen, but all I ask is your forgiveness every time.


Swift:

I’ll try. But you gotta try too.


Bhurt:

Yes you can bring Sean. I like him, I don’t care.

Swift:

Ok. Thanks


Bhurt:

Sure thing. Get packed up ok?


Swift:

Ok


Bhurt:

Swift


Swift:

Yeah?


Bhurt:

I’m sorry


(Swift nods and walks away)






















(ON THE SHIP> BHURT-BROCK-CAPTAIN OF THE CARGO SHIP(CRYIX) ALONG WITH DEFENDER ONE (BENJEN) AND SHOOTER ONE (CHRIS) they stand there waiting for Swift and Sean to get on board.)


Cryix:

How much longer on those boys Captain?


Bhurt:

Just a few more sir. Sorry.


Brock:

So, while we have the time...Swift has been telling me all about Mr. Nice guy.


Bhurt:

Who is that?


Brock:

You. He came up to me today telling me about the trip, but also included the part about how you have been changing.


Bhurt:

Oh yeah. By the way Brock, thanks for coming. Sorry to put your schedule out of whack.


Brock:

Someone’s changing.


Bhurt:

Yeah well. I do admit that I was very hard on the little guy. He used to running about in that ship being fast and living life just the same way.


Brock:

But that’s the thing, he is different than you.


Bhurt:

I know, I was just worried. He’s a smart kid with lot of potential but he often gets into too much trouble when fighting. Brock, dust blows away, a rock is strong and stays put. He has to learn more. I don’t want to lose him.



Brock:

Sometimes dust is meant to go different places, that’s why the wind takes it there.


Bhurt:

Yeah?

(he can see Swift and Sean in the distance coming up to the ship’s loading area.)


Brock:

This one IS special. Just don’t freak out with him. You’ll stress him out turning him back into a rock.


And rocks sink fast.


Bhurt:

Yeah


(SWIFT AND SEAN GET ON THE BOAT WITH THEIR BAGS)


Swift:

Sorry we’re late. Sean forgot where his bag was. Of all things to forget the location of.


Sean:

Stop making it sound bad, It’s not that embarrassing


Swift:

It kind of is.


Bhurt:

Alright both of you come on lets go


Swift:

Alright


Brock:

On board on board on board.


Alright. Cryix?


Cryix:

Yes Captain


Bhurt:

To the glades we go.


Criyx:

Yes sir


Brock:

You’re a great Captain Bhurt


Bhurt:

Thanks Brock. Means a lot

 

Th-h-th-h-thth-thanks for mentioning me in your script.....it means a lot for me

 

I love this harpo, could add some unexpected badass mk7 ships turning up as backup in the next one

 

mk7 ships will be in the next movie. the sequal. i still havent even given this a title

im already predicting this to be a trilogy so expect some more craziness I'm gonna implement som enew ships and items way further down the road

 

Bump (@TheAntiSnipe this deserves a bump, so dont penalize me for it )

 

i'll try

 

7.
Just some more bromance between your two favorite damage dealers. Hope you guys enjoy!
(night on the boat, everyone is sleeping except for Bhurt and Cryix. Bhurt walks up the stair from the sleeping quarters of the ship to get some fresh air)

Cryix:
Hello Captain. Anything I can do for you?

Bhurt:
Oh no no no you’re fine. I just need some fresh air. Thank you

Cryix:
Sure thing



(Bhurt goes over to the side of the boat, sits down, and looks across the warm waters of the southern glades. They were very pretty and had a nice flow to them. The waters would crash against each other. Then, the humidity from the smooth blankets would warm up Bhurt’s face. I love smelling the ocean water, he thought to himself, I can tell wherever I am just by the smell of the water.

He keeps looking over the water as we see the waves crash against the boat.

He looks up at the moon and lays back. In a short time, he falls asleep having a flashback

A mother, holding a baby in her arms. Bhurt is standing over the both of them looking down at the baby, smiling as well. A doctor approaches and asks, “what will you name him?”

The scene changes to a different flashback. Bhurt is fastening a boy into toy ship seat. Bhurt starts pointing at the toys gears and buttons explaining what everyone does.

Switch to another flashback, Bhurt and the kid, now a little bit grown up. They are fighting. Bhurt gets so angry that he hits him.

Switch to another flashback, Bhurt is getting a backrub by his wife. She is comforting him.

Switch to another flashback, Bhurt is watching a speeder boat zoom across the water.
Change flashback again. Bhurt is getting a phone call. He can barely breathe. He turns to his wife and tells her something. She breaks down crying

Change flashback: Bhurt and his wife are in an argument

Change flashback again, Bhurt sees his wife leaving him down the street

Change flashback. Bhurt is sitting alone at his office, sadly stirring his coffee

Change the flashback again to Brock telling him how long Ship repairs will take

Switch flashback again to the Harbormaster telling him about the new weapon and his guild getting scared.

Change flashback to the Harbormaster telling him that he never goes against command

Change flashback to Bhurt telling the Harbormaster that he is leaving on a trip, and the Harbormaster showing Bhurt a look of disapproval and saying that he shouldn’t because the war is more important

BHURT WAKES UP
Bhurt is breathing heavy. He looks around. He is still on the boat
He looks across from himself and sees Brock.

Brock:
Nightmare?

Bhurt:
Yeah. You can say that

Brock:
Well you’re sweating buckets

Bhurt:
I...oh. Yeah.

How long was I asleep?

Brock:
I don’t think long. Cause I got up here and you looked like you had just dozed off. And now you’re up so...a minute or so

Bhurt:
No. That felt like forever

Brock:
What was it about?

Bhurt:
Him

Brock:
Oh, you still get visions?

Bhurt:
Yeah, but not as bad as now

Brock:
Why are you worrying about him?

Bhurt:
Because. It feels like I’m starting over

Brock:
But you’re not

Bhurt:
Yeah I am.

Brock:
No, you are not! You are being given a second chance

Bhurt:
I don’t deserve one Brock

Brock:
You do. You’re a very honorable man Bhurt

Bhurt:
Yeah but lately I haven’t been. My temper, my worrying about the war, me saying lets keep pushing to lets not and instead go on a trip away from the war entirely. Brock, this was the same attitude that I had last time and it left me a broke man. I don’t deserve him.

Brock:
Well I’m not gonna train Swift. That’s your job as Captain to do so. It is also to overcome your fear as Captain correct?

Bhurt:
Yes

Brock:
Then do so!! Don’t be such a downer. If you keep doubting yourself Bhurt, then yes history will repeat itself.

Bhurt:
Ok

Brock:
Think of that dream as a warning to not freak out. That dream was a gift telling you what went wrong.

Bhurt:
Yeah Everything

Brock:
Ok stop it

Bhurt:
It’s true though

Brock:
It is supremely false and you know it.

Bhurt:
How so?

Brock:
Do you ever stop, look around. Can that do that...can that do it?

Bhurt;
Yes

Brock:
Now when you do. How do you look at things?

Bhurt:
What do you mean?

Brock
With optimism or something else?

Bhurt:
I think I have been worrying too much

Brock:
There you go! It’s ok to say this stuff. If you acknowledge your mistakes, you get better. Trust me.

Bhurt:
I just don’t want to let him down

Brock:
You won’t. I’ll help you. Everyone here will. We are family

Bhurt:
Thanks Brock. Again. Haha

Brock:
Yeah. Anytime brother. Anyway. I’m gonna try to catch some Z’s. And some peace and quiet. You good up here.

Bhurt:
Yeah, I’m next to the water, where I belong.

Brock:
Hey Bhurt

Bhurt:
Yeah?

Brock:
You’ve changed everyone else's lives’ on this ship, what makes you think you can’t do it for him.

I’m just saying

Bhurt:
Yeah you’re right

Brock:
Good night

Bhurt:
Good night Brock

Good night Orpheus

 

What the hell had happened to all......no one is liking such gud script anymore......bcz its long???? oh c'mon save some time and read it and like it

 

Whoa Orpheus?
Excellent work though.
Um... could you include me in some way?

 

M sure he will add u in later scenes......he added me too

 

I'd be honoured if you could include my name somewhere dude! Honestly - I'd love to be one of the bad guys!!!
Loving the new additions too, hell of a lot more detailed than I thought it would be, great character building

 

Hope I well be Added ( i Hope )

 

8. alright everyone here is part 8 of the movie @The Friendly Fixer I have found a spot for you. @Neptune Gaming im working on it, youre in the next scene for, i can only type much bro, sorry. "Hop" you guys enjoy! you'll figure out who the two mysterious people at the end of this script are in the next post

(The next morning. The sun comes up on the warm waters of the southern glades. Far in the distance, you can see town coming up from the horizon. Captain Cryix goes over to the bell on the ship, looks at his watch (7:00 a.m.) and rings it so that everyone onboard can hear it.)


Swift:

(running up the stairs)

Are we there yet captain


(behind him, Brock, Sean, Bhurt, BenJen, and Chris.)


I’ve been up all night waiting for this day.


Brock:

We know, we tried all night to get you to be quiet and go to sleep.


Bhurt:

Nah nah, he’s fine. This is important for these youngins. Sean and Swift have never been any place else other than the base.


Swift:

I know! That’s why I'm excited. I’ve never been in a city before.


Sean:

What’s the name of this one


Bhurt:

Niento


Sean:

It’s so big


Bhurt:

Guess the population


Swift:

A million



Bhurt:

Eh. Close maybe?


Sean:

A billion


Bhurt:

Definitely not, haha. Try more like, 35 million


Sean:

35 mil


Brock:

And decreasing


Sean:

What? Wait why?


Bhurt:

Well that’s the reason why we’re here. A long time ago, a big factory named McDonnal Douglas used to craft many ships, weapons, and ammunition. It was destroyed a long time ago when Gaia raided the city and destroyed the town. Rumor has it that they killed the man that was running it, however I believe otherwise. So now, the population decreases because of the frequent bouts in the city between the Douglas supporters and the Gaians that still stay here, and the fact that the majority of the job base has left.


Sean:

That’s sad


Swift:

Wait. Gilligan might not be dead?


Bhurt:

Well no. Cause here’s the thing. I’ve been doing some research, and the date that Captain Gilligan died, and the date when the grenade was seen on the water doesn’t make sense. You see, He died 15 months before the grenade appeared. How can someone who had access to all of the plans for weapons of McDonnal Douglas die, and then have another weapon appear. Mortimer isn’t an engineer on ships, neither is Isak. They’re rogues. They have help and it’s coming from somewhere.

Swift:

Now that’s weird. So w-what are we gonna do exactly? Cause that city looks cool, I wanna go sightseeing


Brock:

No. None of that. Even though the city looks nice there are still Gaians here who would love to pull a weapon on us, if they found out who we are


Bhurt:

No we’ll try to have fun here. I still wanna give these two a wonderful time.


Brock:

Alright. I agree.


Bhurt:

Good. You guys ready?


Sean and Swift:

Yes sir!


Bhurt:

Alright. CRYIX! Get this boat to the shore.


Cryix:

Yes sir















(The boat lands at the busy dock of Niento. Everyone gets offboard.)


Sean:

Wow! Look at this place man! IT’S AWESOOOMMEE!!!


Swift:

Bhurt come on, we gotta explore


Bhurt:

Ok ok one sec. Gameplan Alright?


Swift:

Ok


Bhurt:

Alright we’ll go exploring in a second but Cryix is probably really tired. Here Benjen, you and Chris take the captain to the hotel I made reservations at, ok?-here’s the directions


Benjen

Yes sir


Chris

Yes Sir


Bhurt:

Alright good, now let’s see, where do we wanna go?


(They look around the main street for places to eat, there are tons. A bar named Dobson’s Tears. Another restaurant though looked really intriguing. It was called Friendly Fixer’s Firehouse Subs.)


Swift:

Let’s go there


Bhurt:

Alright. Looks good.



Brock:

They better have good food. I’m starving


Sean:

Same


(the group walks into the busy restaurant looking around for an opening. They find a table in the side of the of the place for four, perfect. As they sit down, a lovely lady walks over and hands them menus.


Waitress:

Hello boys, what would you like today?


Bhurt:

Well I don’t know, but your menu sure looks good.


Waitress:

Yes, it is. Are you boys new here?


Brock:

Yes we are


Waitress:

Well let me show you the menu. On the first page are your appetizers. Then on the second page we have our grillers. On the third are our paninis. And the on the final one we have our melts. Then on the back are our drinks and other flavored beverages for desert.


Brock:

Wow. Well um could you give us a sec?


Waitress:

Sure do you guys want drinks before I leave you


Brock:

Um yea...that’d be awesome, um, I’ll take a molasses soda.


Brock:

I’ll have one too

Waitress:

Alright and what about you two cuties?


Sean:

I’ll have a lemonade


Swift:

I’ll have one too.


Waitress:

Awesome I’ll be right back with those drinks take your time on deciding.


Bhurt:

Thank you


So, our mission starts now.


Brock:

What do you mean?


Bhurt:

Well, we gotta investigate people. Listen in on conversations. Find things that look suspicious.


Brock:

You’re gonna get us kicked out of this place


Bhurt:

Well I’m sorry to bug you but the harbormaster is expecting me-


Brock:

sHH!


(people turn around and look at the table, they look away)


Brock:

You can’t say that. Alright? From now on we just call him ‘boss’ ok?



Sean:

Wait who are we doing that for?


Swift:

Are you deaf?

(whispering)

The harbormaster


Sean:

Oh ok. Got it.


Bhurt:

Then how do we find info?


Swift:

We could act like tourists


Sean:

Yeah, ask people if they know anything about the area.


Brock:

Right. Go right up to someone and ask them do they know Douglas


Sean:

No I mean introduce yourself, say that you’re a tourist, and then ask about stuff going on in the area.


Bhurt:

It’s not that bad of an idea


Brock:

Ok but if we get killed I’m telling god ‘I tried to save them’


Bhurt:

Oh Brock don’t worry. That won’t happen.


Brock:

I’m just saying be careful. These people looked short tempered


Bhurt:

How can you tell?


Brock:

Well look, a majority of them are at the bar. People don’t drink for nothing.


Bhurt:

Good point. Who looks safe to talk to?


Brock:

None of them, are deaf?


(Swift and Sean laugh)


Ok, try that guy, in the gray jacket.


Bhurt:

Ok


(Bhurt gets up and walks over to the seat next to the man, sits down, and motions to the bartender for a drink. He turns and smiles at the man next to him)


THE MAN:

Turn away


Bhurt:

Sorry. I just wanted to know a great place to go while in town


THE MAN:

Out of here, that’s where.


Bhurt:

Wait why?


THE MAN:

You really don’t know what’s going on here do you?


Bhurt:

No. sorry.

THE MAN:

Well it’s not your fault


Bhurt:

Who’s is it? Certainly not Carthage right?


THE MAN:

Why would you say that?


Bhurt:

Oh well, you know. Carthage being on this side of the bay, as well as Niento. You would think that, it’d be the opposite sides fault.


THE MAN:

Yeah. You sound pretty smart.


Bhurt:

Well I know my stuff


THE MAN:
Then why are you talking to me?


Bhurt:

I just wanna know why this town looks bad


THE MAN:

Well if you know everything why don’t you tell me


Bhurt:

No no no, sir I...I would like to hear your opinion


THE MAN:

Why do you have a badge?


(Bhurt didn’t realize that on his shirt was a badge that said ‘Guild 1’ on it.)


Bhurt:

Oh this is nothing


THE MAN:

Who are you

(people are starting to look)


Bhurt:

I’m a nobody.


THE MAN:

Yes you are

( the man rips off Bhurt’s badge, and holds it up into the air of the bar )


LOOK! He’s an imposter. He’s from Guild 1!


(a couple of men stand up from their chairs around the bar with their hands at their waist line.)


I hate people like you

(He starts to reach towards his waist belt too, this time, we see what they are reaching for, a gun)



(another man stands up from a section of the restaurant shouting)

A different man:

HEY! This is a holiday let’s keep it peaceful, give me the man.


(THE MAN hands Bhurt over to the other guy and stalks off.)


The other guy (lol right?):

You here with anyone else?


(Bhurt looks over to his table)


(The other guy motions to his woman to stand up.)


Chef, table 23 will be outside with me, Yves get the drinks.


Brock:

Nice going.

 

Sure buddy

 

What about me? JK

I hope this does become a movie tho, coz it's really good. Keep it up m8!

 

U all r commenting saying that it's gud....it is.....show this by liking

 

tru dat

 

Wow , this is getting intense. Nice job
The otherguy was hilarious.